Wednesday, June 30, 2010
Contest :)
Ello bffflz! 4th of July is coming up!i have a contest for u. write a mini poem about 4th of JUly. It could b Ficition or non-fiction. For example heres a poem I wrote about halloween.
Halloween
Creepy, crawly spiders come around,
to see how many kids they will surround.
Boo! Wacht out for those ghost,
they could turn you into toast!
Brooms fly in the air,
with wichtes trying to be a scare.
Don't worrie my friends,
this day won't end,
if we grab all the candy and run
Halloween
Did you like my poem! its was cool i thought. So write one just like that for 4th of July. Leave a comment on my blog for the conest poem. I will have many people i know in real life, to jugde to see whos is best. And cuz im a good writer i will no the good things to look out for. Good LUck!!!!
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Ello lol awsome poem molly heres mine
ReplyDeleteFireworks
Explodin crashing and popping
we all watch them dropping.
Throught the sky they learn to dance and prance.Booms bangs and crashes will all end with flashes. When we think its done theres still more fun at the BIG finale
Fireworks
Heres another one
Our colors
Our nations colors of red white and blue
mean many things to me and you.
They mean of the soldiers who helped us be free.
Many of us like Francis Scott Key who wrote the Star Spangled Banner. Red white and blu means many things to me How about you??
Soldiers
ReplyDeleteMany marching near and far
Walking without a car,
Shooting day and night at everyone in sight.
They cant come home or write a poem ,
They can only write to you an me .
While trying to keep you and me free.
4th of July
ReplyDeleteOne of the most important holiday
is our Independence Day.
We see fireworks up at night
making everything dazzling and bright.
For all of those who had died
fighting for our freedom through day and night.
Without their bravery and their courage
we wouldn't have our freedom and be discourage.
So have a good time today while watching an awesome parade.
Hip Hip Hooray!
~bubbles125 :)